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Once ler was walking.
Well he was walking but where.
Even he didn't know.He didn't even know how he got there.
One moment he was in his house sleeping when a dark intruder with glowing red eyes opened his door. He was tall and his posture was something like a demon in disguise.
Once ler gasped but the figure just seemed to float over to him in a mere second and pain flowed through his body after that and he assumed he was knocked out.

There was pitch black darkness everywhere.
Fog actually visible when the moon barely gave any light to reflect off of it.
Echoes moaned through the tall bare trees.
They seemed to choir and chime together like a creepy harmony.
Soon they only made the sound of ooooh but was split into a scary three part harmony,if he could even call it harmony.

Bats flew by his face and he coiled.
Glowing eyes shone through the dark.
Circling him.
One with glowing red eyes started to walk forward but Once ler ran.
He saw that whatever was chasing him was right behind him.
Soon Once ler saw a dark place in the forest to run into.
He couldn't see it was so dark.
Branches wacked him in his face and leaving blood and scrapes like claws behind.
Soon it was becoming a narrow path where the trees moved closer to his body.
It ripped his shirt and pants up.

It even snatched his fedora but he didn't have the guts to turn around and get it.
The only thing he could think of was he was going to have to use all his energy to escape.
Soon he didn't realize the path had come to an end and that there was a cliff.
He looked down but it was to late,he fell straight down.
Plummeting to surely his death.
People think that when your falling you feel lighter than air.
You don't really think about anything,you think that something is going to save you.

But the reality is life isn't a fairy tale.
There's death and happy endings are scarce.
He landed with a thud.
He was bleeding.
He knew he was.
He knew that nobody cared enough to save his pathetic useless life.
He knew he was going to die.
But as his vision blurred somebody was running up to him.
And he shut his eyes...
Forever he thought.

But he didn't wake up in heaven.
He didn't turn to nothingness.
He woke up in a small cottage.
He rubbed his head and his eyes shot out like cannons.
"I c-can't have survived that! I-its just not possible!"
He huddled up into a ball.
He noticed he was wearing only underwear and newly placed bandages covered him over.

"H-hello,is anybody in here?"
"Yes just a minute."
The voice was girlish.
She stepped into the room.
Long brown curly hair.
Glasses red and round.
Smile nice and friendly.
And warm innocent eyes.

She was five foot two.
Small but cute.
She was skinny and wore plain attire.
But she was beautiful.
"Hey sweetie you're awake,is there anything I can get you?"
He stared at her wide eyed jaw to the floor.
He pinched himself.
"Ouch!"
"Oh silly your awake and the most important thing is your not DEAD."
He looked at himself in the mirror beside him.
His face was covered in blood and he had cut his head open.

To be countinued...
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millypie360 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww man!!! i gotta read more!!!
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flymyway Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Writer
Omg I love u!!! Thnx
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millypie360 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha your welcome!!!
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flymyway Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Writer
Tumblr?
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millypie360 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes!
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flymyway Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Writer
Oncelersregret.tumblr.com
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BlazedMemoryInk Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really interesting! Can't wait for more. I think I know who the guardian is.... But I may be wrong. :D
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