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Ok I normally would not talk about what I'm about to talk about. So if you are afraid of evil and things that are evil I suggest you skip this chapter.
Once ler was asleep next to Mackie. He tossed and turned in his nightmare.
He was alone. That was the only word that described it. ALONE...
It was dark. Darkness in every direction. Like a never ending abyss of black nothingness.
Demonic laughs were heard all around him.
Chants were heard off in the distance.
"Hush and shush and close your eyes. Become like us demons in disguise. Be consumed by the fire that never dies. Let yourself be loaded with lies. Let us help you stop your cries."
They chanted sickly these things over again. As if to get into his mind and hijack his thoughts.
Soon glowing red eyes crawled closer to him. Circling him as if almost dancing around him.
It was almost hypnotic.
They smiled and glared their fangs,sharper than any sword or knife.
They laughed demonicly.
Soon he was surrounded by them. No way out.
"Let us show you your demise."
Then a tornado of fire circled around him. Wind keeping him trapped inside.
The fire burned his skin leaving blood.
He saw images of himself.
This was not him. No.
The figure was in a clad green suit just like his. But the way his posture and face expression was staring at him,it shot bullets through his chest. He had daggers for teeth and demonic green eyes.
Inside those gloves were claws. Like knives hidden in green.
He stared at the image in front of him.
Suddenly the man stepped out of the fire.
"Hello Oncie. Let's seen what you become."
No. No this wasn't right.
The fire swirled faster.
He saw dead creatures all over lifeless and decaying corpse remains.
"No."
He saw the millions of stumps and one finnal tree.
"No."
He saw the sky and the ground all grey and dead.
"No."
He saw his factory poisoning everything.
"No."
He saw everything alive start to die before his eyes.
"No." He closed his eyes but the images still showed in his mind.
He looked at him yelling at the Lorax. The last tree was dead. He saw his family abondon him again.
"No."
He saw all the animals leave even Melvin.
"Stop."
He saw the Lorax give him a grim sad look and without a word leave him.
"No!"
The evil one just chuckled and tackled him down and beat him up.
He tore open his skin and Oncie felt agonizing pain,almost as if he could die on the spot.
"You're lying." He said weakly. "I... I know this can't happen."
His skin was torn up. It was so bad that praticly his meat and some bones were showing in some places. Blood was everywhere.
He thought he was going to die right there.
"Oh Oncie,that's not even THE BEST PART."
He laughed and picked him up.
Oncie had enough strength to stand but not enough to walk.
Slowly an image appeared.
'Mackie.'
She stared at him weakly.
"Dad."
Soon she ran towards him and hugged him tight.
She was very pale and had dark circles under her eyes.
"Poor Mackie. She never told you. It is to late by now ."
"What's to late? Tell me now!"
"She is,or was ill. By now in this image she is about to die. She had lung cancer."
"No...no your lying! Yes. Your just filling my head with these lies!"
He shook his head solemnly.
"Just watch."
He saw that she was coughing.
"Can I read you something?"
"Yes Mackie let's go to your bedroom."
So she staggered to her room. Happy though in pain.
Oncie was crying to see her happy but in that condition knowing she was going too die.
She picked up the bible she had handed him years ago.
"John 3:16 ,
For God so loved the world,that He gave His only begotten son,that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish... But have ever lasting life."
He smiled a sad smile knowing what she ment.
"I'm not scared of death. Death is a new beginning. I will watch you from above and wait for you. Remember, that we can't fight death,but we can choose where we go when we die."
Though only 16 she was taking this like she wasn't sad about dying.
"I think I'm going to take a nap. Will you lay with me?"
"Yes."
And she shut her eyes.
For the last time.
Then the tornado cleared revealing a stone. Oncie walked towards it.
Loveing daughter of Once ler,it read.
Mackie ,
Birth. Death
4/18/50. 3/16/66
"NO!"
Suddenly the grave opened up.
The evil snuck up behind him.
"Why don't you join her?"
And with that he shoved him down the hole.
"Ahhh!"
He woke up sweating.
"Mackie."
He turned to her.
There she was lying in bed unharmed.
"That won't happen to you. I promise."
To be continued....
P.S sorry about the dates on there. I'm just guessing that would be like near the time it would have happened.
Once ler was asleep next to Mackie. He tossed and turned in his nightmare.
He was alone. That was the only word that described it. ALONE...
It was dark. Darkness in every direction. Like a never ending abyss of black nothingness.
Demonic laughs were heard all around him.
Chants were heard off in the distance.
"Hush and shush and close your eyes. Become like us demons in disguise. Be consumed by the fire that never dies. Let yourself be loaded with lies. Let us help you stop your cries."
They chanted sickly these things over again. As if to get into his mind and hijack his thoughts.
Soon glowing red eyes crawled closer to him. Circling him as if almost dancing around him.
It was almost hypnotic.
They smiled and glared their fangs,sharper than any sword or knife.
They laughed demonicly.
Soon he was surrounded by them. No way out.
"Let us show you your demise."
Then a tornado of fire circled around him. Wind keeping him trapped inside.
The fire burned his skin leaving blood.
He saw images of himself.
This was not him. No.
The figure was in a clad green suit just like his. But the way his posture and face expression was staring at him,it shot bullets through his chest. He had daggers for teeth and demonic green eyes.
Inside those gloves were claws. Like knives hidden in green.
He stared at the image in front of him.
Suddenly the man stepped out of the fire.
"Hello Oncie. Let's seen what you become."
No. No this wasn't right.
The fire swirled faster.
He saw dead creatures all over lifeless and decaying corpse remains.
"No."
He saw the millions of stumps and one finnal tree.
"No."
He saw the sky and the ground all grey and dead.
"No."
He saw his factory poisoning everything.
"No."
He saw everything alive start to die before his eyes.
"No." He closed his eyes but the images still showed in his mind.
He looked at him yelling at the Lorax. The last tree was dead. He saw his family abondon him again.
"No."
He saw all the animals leave even Melvin.
"Stop."
He saw the Lorax give him a grim sad look and without a word leave him.
"No!"
The evil one just chuckled and tackled him down and beat him up.
He tore open his skin and Oncie felt agonizing pain,almost as if he could die on the spot.
"You're lying." He said weakly. "I... I know this can't happen."
His skin was torn up. It was so bad that praticly his meat and some bones were showing in some places. Blood was everywhere.
He thought he was going to die right there.
"Oh Oncie,that's not even THE BEST PART."
He laughed and picked him up.
Oncie had enough strength to stand but not enough to walk.
Slowly an image appeared.
'Mackie.'
She stared at him weakly.
"Dad."
Soon she ran towards him and hugged him tight.
She was very pale and had dark circles under her eyes.
"Poor Mackie. She never told you. It is to late by now ."
"What's to late? Tell me now!"
"She is,or was ill. By now in this image she is about to die. She had lung cancer."
"No...no your lying! Yes. Your just filling my head with these lies!"
He shook his head solemnly.
"Just watch."
He saw that she was coughing.
"Can I read you something?"
"Yes Mackie let's go to your bedroom."
So she staggered to her room. Happy though in pain.
Oncie was crying to see her happy but in that condition knowing she was going too die.
She picked up the bible she had handed him years ago.
"John 3:16 ,
For God so loved the world,that He gave His only begotten son,that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish... But have ever lasting life."
He smiled a sad smile knowing what she ment.
"I'm not scared of death. Death is a new beginning. I will watch you from above and wait for you. Remember, that we can't fight death,but we can choose where we go when we die."
Though only 16 she was taking this like she wasn't sad about dying.
"I think I'm going to take a nap. Will you lay with me?"
"Yes."
And she shut her eyes.
For the last time.
Then the tornado cleared revealing a stone. Oncie walked towards it.
Loveing daughter of Once ler,it read.
Mackie ,
Birth. Death
4/18/50. 3/16/66
"NO!"
Suddenly the grave opened up.
The evil snuck up behind him.
"Why don't you join her?"
And with that he shoved him down the hole.
"Ahhh!"
He woke up sweating.
"Mackie."
He turned to her.
There she was lying in bed unharmed.
"That won't happen to you. I promise."
To be continued....
P.S sorry about the dates on there. I'm just guessing that would be like near the time it would have happened.
Ive Been tagged
I've been tagged by blazed memory ink.
I'm not going to write the requirements cause I have math to do after this so
Let's Get To The Questions!
1. So how's your life? Not like reality and real life stuff, that's boring. But how's internet life?^.^
It's all good bro! I've got like 516 followers on tumblr so I feel like I'm popular now. I feel so loved!!! XD Next Question!
2. Do you have a real life?
Yes. I think every breathing person has a life. But I write books and go to school, Uhm, I take care of special needs kids and I'm currently taking singing/guitar lessons.
3. I'm going to stop asking about life.... So which would you be: U
Her White Wings a Once Ler fanfiction
Chapter one: Falling down
When you fall down do you get back up again?
Or do you sit on the floor and sulk in a dark corner.
When you fail do you keep at it?
Or give up?
She sped through the halls.
Those evil men right behind her.
She was scared to death.
She knew they were going to kill her.
They were done with the tests and were going to finish her off.
She had tried to escape several times but could never out run them.
But as time went by she grew stronger, smarter, faster and more curious about what was outside of the depressing gray hallways with dim lighting.
She was going to escape this time.
She had to!
She just had to
Quick
Speed fast
It has to last
I'll be late
For my date
Think quick
Let it stick
Here at last
Wow that was fast.
Bubbles
Round
Sphere
Crystal clear
Wet and sticky
My wand is drippy
Floating higher
It never tires
Pop
Falls with a plop.
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bfwehfafevwakvdwegwva! I can 't wait for the next one!! Once ler you better freaking change or adbgwhefvaeryfkaeffaerf. sorry spasm. XD